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I really enjoyed your story. Please keep updating it I'm curious to see what will happen to Charlie and what will happen in regards to Wonka and Charlie's relationship. Keep writing.

Yay! You're updating again! xxxxx Aww good old Grampa Joe, always understanding. xxx I can't wait for the next chapter to see how Charlie has faired at school. xx

This is an amazing story. It was the first Wonka/Charlie story I ever read and I still continue comparing all others to it. I am in love with this peice and I want to see the way it continues, but by all means, do not rush, I am a writer myself and I know how how the creative process work. Slow and steady wins the race. I have read this at least a dozen times, and I have the story saved to my hard drive to read when I am not online. It has captured me and I do hope tht you continue it as well as you have started it. I also am fond of the way you have incorperated Paganism into the story. It's not everyday that you get to read such an interesting piece of work.

another nice installment

It's me Muse again. Just so you know I ended up writing my own fic. I would like to blame you for helping me. Hopefully you'll like it.

Muse

Once again, you cease to amaze me. Your writing, grammar, spelling, ideas, and everything has really made me think either you're really old and wise, or you're a school teacher, because you're just too awesome. And the chapter, perhaps the best yet, but I did really enjoy the jungle one. I hope you keep it up, I'm surprized you're still going at the rate you are, most people don't even finish their stories, and their chapters are a fourth as long as yours are! I appreciate what you do and I'm sure everyone else here does as well. And this story is by far the best Charlie and the Chocolate Factory story out there, hands down!

Congrats you did it again! You keep writing and I'll keep reading. I actually have this very strong urge to write a CatCF story myself. I know what I want to do in it, just getting it done will be insane. I'm sure you know how hard it is to find time to write. Anyway, I told my friend that she had better read your story and understand why I wasn't offeneded like she assumed I'd be. Again I find the whold pagan thing to be tastefully done and am impressed with the depth you go into it. When you were talking about the energy, and all the objects I was nodding along and clapping. I very much enjoyed the new chapter. Keep up the great work.

Muse.

That was an awesome chapter! I enjoyed it thoughly.

I have to admit that I wasn't aware of what I was reading when I started reading your fic. A friend sent me the link, I think as a joke, however; I was blown away with the skill that you have while writing. I could hear their voices, and I could see these things happening. I had decided that when I reached the end of what you had to offer I would leave a review. Truthfully this isn't normally the kind of fic I read, however; I will be looking for more from you in the near future. This is very well thought out and a little scary sometimes, but a womderful work of art. Please go on with this story. I look forward to reading more.... oh and please dont worry about me I handle well with new ideas. Infact I have plot bunnies staring at me right now for a fic with this pairing.

Anon

Oh yes it's me again, I was unaware that someone had already written under Anon so I thought I would let you know a bit more of me. I my self am considered Pagan by outsiders and myself, however; I am not considered wiccan. The depth you have explained Willie Wonka and his beliefs are amazing so I guess from hence on I will sign as Muse.

till we meet again
Muse