rate_review Reviews

Oh my, this is one of the best, most captivating fanfics I have ever read! It is absolutely brilliant. Although it wouldn't kill you to check for typos before posting (trivial, I know, but typos always distract me). I don't know who to root for. I would love to see Charlie and W. Wonka living together, totally happy. But Mr. Bucket isn't being unreasonable in the slightest, and Wonka really creeps me out sometimes. Anyway, I hope you will post again very soon, but now that I've finished what you've written so far, I can finally get on with what I should be doing--work!

Love the new chapter, and the story Wonka told to Charlie was so sweet..... The perfume...vanilla envelope....is it supposed to keep her calm while she reads on Paganism? Or help her really understand what the texts are saying? So many questions...but I guess that's the point of it, too keep people coming back to read more, neh? No worries there.

I checked out the pics by Loony Lucifer....and have one thing to say, WOW!

If I could do pics half that good...I wouldn't be hiding my drawings away from the world, they fit the story so well....if ya talk to Loony...just relay that the art.....is just fucking fantastic!

Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter, I'll be looking in from time to time....

Keep up the fantastic work,

Liz

That was a lovely piece of a chapter.:)
I must say, Mr. Bucket has a very, very dirty mind... :o
and that little bedtime story was excellent. :)

I hope to get more updated chapters in my e-mail! ;)

Well done on another chapter! the story Wonka told Charlie was too cute cute! xxx I can't wait for the next chapter! xxxx

That chapter just made me even more anxious for the next one, I was thinking that maybe Charlie would go to Wonka's room at night or something, mm, I dunno, maybe he will, so yeah, you see how much I wanna read the next chapter? REALLY badly, man, SO good. MORE! >.<

I was once again inspired to draw by your story, though it's not a scene, it's still Charlie, aaand, he's acting very lewd in this picture, ahaha. Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, and your story have just been the biggest inspiration to my drawings that I have ever had, and I'd like to thank you for that, not only do I have more of my work to show, but I also get better at art with each new one I make. Well, I hope you like it!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v329/Hatii/CharlieCouch.jpg

i luf your story...and thanks for the pic refs

This BLEW ME AWAY. All of the references you make to other artist/stories/movies etc. are wonderful! It takes a very intelligent person to throw little things like this in there with your story. Along with all your knowledge/research of Paganism...... *gapes in awe* You are either brilliant, or have an incredible knack for writing...... I think it's both. ;) PLEASE update soon, your story is a wonder to read, and I cannot wait for more!

THIS STORY IS SOO AMAZING! You are so talented! I cant wait to see what happens next. PLEASE write more soon!

I really like this story! Look forward to reading more!