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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! More! More! And gosh darn the consequences!
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January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You are an amazing writer, let me just say that first. Second, that was HOT. Hehe. Third, I LOVE IT. LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
intersting. is there going to be a new chapter to this? or is this a stand-alone only?
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is the wording that makes the tale so erotic. I was delighted by the notion that Wonka's room should be as ever-changing as his eyes. I enjoyed that Wonka set up Charlie with temptation as he seemed to have set up the other children - more out of pleasure than malice this time or is there a difference to him? It had a perfect amount of suggestive detail to keep my imagination busy for days and left me with a real curiousity about the author Lovecraft whose style you admire.
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU STOPPED!!! WHY'D YOU STOP!?!? PLEASE TELL ME YOU PLAN TO CONTINUE!!! *SOBS* YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT AT THAT!!! I'M HOOKED NOW....SO PLEASE..PLEASE...CONTINUE.
don't mind typing, gloves and typing do not mix
don't mind typing, gloves and typing do not mix
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^is there an update or do we have to hunger with need and imagination about what's gping on after this?
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story and its imagery is really captivating! I was almost holding my breath as I read what Charlie saw and felt. I especially loved the image of Willy lying on his back, clad in a black silk robe, with his hair fanned out around his head. Delicious...