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i really am enjoying this story, i am sorry it has been so long between now and the last update. i sure hope you come back.

Absolutely amazing writing that does the series more justice than several of the other fics I recently read before this one. Alaric is such a breath of fresh air, and a great take on a Carpathian raised in a different culture than that of the norm. Keep up the great work! I'm bookmarking this and can't wait to see more :)

ok i can't wait for you to write more.i hope you turn on the heat with Ryan she needs not to be so pigheaded

Love it. I am working on a fanfic based on the dark series myself for a friend, plan on putting up at least the beginning soon here, but I really like your story. It would be nice if Feehan would break her pattern and have a YOUNG male find his lifemate... kudos to you for coming up with it first!

I love this story.
Your writing is great as are your charcters.
Post again soon please......

Nice story so far. It's just getting to the good part though... Please write more!

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Fiona

I am a hugh fan of christian feehan. I have read as many of her books as i can find. my favorit character in her dark series has to be gregori. his whole story interestes me. His lifemate was the carpathian princes daughter. the first book of the series is the second best book. the first would have to be gregori's story. i also love her book wild rain. i haven't heard much more on the series and am dieing to find out more. i know she has writen some short ones that are in a multi-story book, but only one book. have you heard any thing on the series? you did a good job with your ideas, but i must say that i like the more dominating males. true your male is a puppy but he doesn't know much about what he is or how to learn more. he keeps turning to his brother for help and doesn't realy stand on his own. i like how you have the main characters argue during the fight. you say that you don't care for christian's ideas on her characters but i say they are great. true some of them are alike in some ways but that is what makes the whole series her own. the wild hot monkey sex is also a good thing in my mind. true once you've read one you've read them all, but for a true fan you see the differences in each character and the sex sences she writes. but over all you did very well.
dani

I really really like you story. It's written a lot like Feehan herself. Please update soon!

I just finished what you have posted so far, and I enjoyed the last seven chapters as much as I did the first two. I hope you will find time to continue your story soon. So...about the Dark series, do you love it, hate it, or something in between?

I am a big fan of Christine Feehan's Dark series, and I'm really curious if the same can be said of you. But, wether you love it or hate, this story is hillarious, I loved it so far and intend to come back and read the rest it as soon as possible. So, I'm not sure if you have finished it yet, but if you haven't please do! Thanks for writing; we need more humorous stories!