rate_review Reviews

I loved the humor in this story! I especially like the way you portray the two girls and that they have their own "thing" going between them. I like the way some of the different stories in this section each put a different spin on Wonka's character, but yet manage to keep him in character. I personally don't envision Willy Wonka as being sexually inexperienced, but I'm just projecting my own personal "Wonka World" view, I guess. Actually, that aspect of your story contributed to the humor; in spite of the N/C and potentionally dark situation, it was an oddly fun story.

Also, Willy saying, "Please stay." at the end piqued my curiosity as to what was going through his head during his ordeal.

In short, very good story!