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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Add more. Please!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo. Good writing.
I like this Erik.He is more humane than the other Eriks.
Hope to see your next chapter soon.
I like this Erik.He is more humane than the other Eriks.
Hope to see your next chapter soon.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oohh! Hott chapter! Add more! This story is awesome!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I like your evolving Erik. Your obedient servant, PMEL Talia
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! C'est vraiment jolie! Go on!!!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was unbelievably tender and moving. Great job!!!
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wonderful. make it good. let him reach out to her
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, that broke my heart when Erik slugged Marie like that -- she did not deserve that! And after she has been so compliant and willing to serve him. Erik, you creep! I realize he has a terrible temper and is besotted with Christine, but really, his behavior was completely out of line and makes him a coward -- picking on a vulnerable and kind person. He deserves the silent treatment from Marie for a good long while -- he doesn't deserve anything more from her! Great chapter!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, and I love this story!! I adore the way you showed Erik's gentle side with Marie as he caressed her hands on the keyboard. Very sweet and touching. Bravo!! Waiting for more!!
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievable. I am in awe. This is a masterpiece and I commend you and your intense talent. Keep up with writing!