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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*applauds* Very nice. It has a decent plot, strong central characters, the minor characters have personality... I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**tilts head slightly** Have I mentioned how much I love your writing? Abso-fab characterizations. **nods**
Just something about Kale... sort of familiar. ;)
And will have them back to you shortly.
Just something about Kale... sort of familiar. ;)
And will have them back to you shortly.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I was supposed to be working but somehow have become totally sucked into this story! Love it, keep those chapters coming .. :)
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry and write the next chapter!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow he actually said it to her but now the question is does she love him and if she does will she tell him now review folks and let see if we can find out
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
add on. ADD ON
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah - If Aslan is there - I'm there. I'm loving this story so far. And as one of the other reviewers said above - you are writing an actual story with a real plot and dialogue, etc. I love these kinds of stories. They're more realistic as opposed to the ones where the characters meet, fall in love or hate each others guts, and then are fucking each other like rabbits by the third paragraph!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a great fic so far, definitely far above what we usually read in the Narnia category here, very well written and very emotionnal... I like the developping stronger relationship between Lucy and Tumnus, even if it has IMO to stay in some kind of "decent" or rather spiritual way... Can't wait for next chapter :D
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow this story is just getting better and better i honestly think this is alot better heartfelt wise then the movie what do you folks think?
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh It counts. I am just a total Review whore. I love getting feed back and knowing that people like the work that I write. I loved getting your review. I was grinning wide and in fact, after I got the first two, it was almost immediat that I wrote chapter two. They inspire me. If I know I have people that really want to see what is coming next ? That is just..the greatest thing.
I hope to see this story soaring with reviews. My one story, The blood of Three kings. It is a conyinuation of my first story Serenity..it has 74 reviews on it. I love seeing that number so high. It is an original/Fantasy fic though. All of my others are. This is my second attempt at writing a story within an already established fandom but I love Narnia and have my own ideas how I thought it should go.
So here we are now. I hope you all are enjoying it. Chapter four should be coming soon. The beta is also working on the chapters as we speak. So they will get reposted with correction soon.
Thank you all! Keep enjoying and reviewing.
Starfyre
I hope to see this story soaring with reviews. My one story, The blood of Three kings. It is a conyinuation of my first story Serenity..it has 74 reviews on it. I love seeing that number so high. It is an original/Fantasy fic though. All of my others are. This is my second attempt at writing a story within an already established fandom but I love Narnia and have my own ideas how I thought it should go.
So here we are now. I hope you all are enjoying it. Chapter four should be coming soon. The beta is also working on the chapters as we speak. So they will get reposted with correction soon.
Thank you all! Keep enjoying and reviewing.
Starfyre