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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let dark Lucy get a heart or something. And you can't leave Aslan at the mercy of his brother! I wanna happy ending for Aslan and Lucy!
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no a cliffhanger. *hold on to edge of seat* one more chapter to go. i cant wait. aww poor shadow lucy. please hurry with the next chapter.
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHH!!!!! omg! lol So much action i love it!! I am dying to see know what happens, it's almost killing me! Please update, uber freaking soon! This chapter rocked my socks off! So well written!
Ah!! lol So excited! lol sorry, i really am excited lmao.
Fair Writing!
Earwen
Ah!! lol So excited! lol sorry, i really am excited lmao.
Fair Writing!
Earwen
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yet another great chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens! I hope you update again soon! O_o
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is great
keep up the good work!
keep up the good work!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. i am on my seat as to what will happen. Dont kill tumnus please!!!!!
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My girlfriend demanded my time. Sorry I wasn't here sooner to review. You better update. My girlfriend said you better also. She likes this story. This last chapter was very evil though. You can not leave us hanging.
Cameron and Elizabeth
Cameron and Elizabeth
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January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally, it's refreshing to see a well written narnia fan fic that doesn't involve badly written incest or some sick self insertion story disquised as a incest fic. do please continue, i definately look forward to seeing how this ends. ((lucy couldn't possibly kill tumnus, could she?))
you're a very talented writter, and it shows. this is a good story, even if the later chapters have yet to be edited. we need more writers like you here. will you marry me?
you're a very talented writter, and it shows. this is a good story, even if the later chapters have yet to be edited. we need more writers like you here. will you marry me?
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!!!!!*sobs* you are so unbelievably evil*sob* don't let her kill Tumnus!! No oh oh *falls down to the ground and begs* Please!
This chapter was very good and very sad, i hate you for that lol. Please update soon! ^__^
Fair writing,
Earwen
P.s I am so excited for the end!!
This chapter was very good and very sad, i hate you for that lol. Please update soon! ^__^
Fair writing,
Earwen
P.s I am so excited for the end!!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are A very Evil and cunning writer. That cliff made me jump out of my seat and yell at the computer. NOOO! My room mate thought I was nuts until she sat down and read this. She Then Yelled at the computer screen. Gah! NOO!! then there was a slur of spanish words that followed that I could not translate. Please update this soon.
Junika
Junika