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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was evil of you. You led us right off that cliff! Poor Tumnus! SOMEONE SAVE HIM! It is a really good story and I love your writing but these Cliffs are going to send me into a heart attack before I turn twenty-four in Febuary.
Butterz!!!
Hugz N Kisses!!
Butterz!!!
Hugz N Kisses!!
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I've been running behind, everyone. But work has been running me to the ground. But I will have most, if not all of the chapters edited and sent back this weekend.
And keep the reviews comming, trust me, you don't want to miss the ending!!!!
And keep the reviews comming, trust me, you don't want to miss the ending!!!!
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>>> 'His groin brushed over her womanly virtue'
I am sorry, but there has got to be a better way to say this! Good story though.
I am sorry, but there has got to be a better way to say this! Good story though.
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay more lucy/tumnus steamy goodness. keep it up. are you trying to make it look like lucy is gonna lose the baby? :( i hope not. please dont let anything happen to Aslan either.
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh. What are you doing to poor Aslan?! Let Lucy save him, let the shadow Lucy get a heart - something! But I do love your writing - all the kids arguments - incest breath! You do have a way with words! Now I want to beat that black lion's ass!
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this was a good chapter but i'am still wondering what will happen next so please hurry and write more chapters i can't wait to read the rest of this story
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL did that guy paul-something steal your story? Cause he seems to be freaking out about it.
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very sweet. *sigh*
i hope they get the there safely and kick Nalsa's bum! great chapter as usual. updat soon!
Fair writing,
Earwen
i hope they get the there safely and kick Nalsa's bum! great chapter as usual. updat soon!
Fair writing,
Earwen
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok now lets see how aslan gets out of this one or else someone is going to be in trouble and i bet evil lucy has to get touched by a faun lol
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Told You I would be back. This is the next chapter. I really can't wait for the next chapter. This is amazingly great. You must update. Aslan in danger? He has to escape. He is Aslan. Update soon!
Cameron
Cameron