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Great story Starfyre! Keep it up! I want to apologize for the other day, i didnt mean to be an sob. Keep up the good work

I turned eighteen four days ago and moved into my own apartment. Woohoo! My room mate showed me this site. She is twenty-one but loves fan fics. She said I might to. This is the first fic I read on this site. I love it! I am going to read the rest of yours too. If they are anything like this I know they will be awesome. Plus, I've never really been intimate and the way you described those acts. I am in awe. I guess it doesn't help that I chose to only like girls but still! If I knew I could find a man that would love me like that? I would be all over him.

I can't wait for more. I also hope I am doing this review right. My friends said I was.


Junika

I love this story and I can't wait for the rest of it! It is very well written. My only criticism would be that you maybe use '...'s too much to trail off your sentences, especially in the later chapters.

Oh no! No you can't do that! Bad author! Let Aslan escape! Bad, BAD, BAD girl! They need Aslan! Oh, yeah. That was mean cutting us off with that tease of a love scene. Okay. Rant is out of my system. Great chapter. Now you just need to update.



Butterz!!

Hugz N Kisses!!

Oooh poor Aslan *huggles the lion and sobs* evil Nalsa! grr*kicks Nalsa in the paw* i hope Aslan will be alright....


Naughty Tumnus *snerk* lol

Great chapter as usual! Update soon!

Fair Writing!

Earwen

Hola!, been a bit since i reviewed and it looks like you're still going strong, great story, looking forward to more chapters to help distract me from working on my own story :)

*cries hysterically* So not fair! Poor Lucy and Tumnus *sob* I hope Aslan will be okay....:'( Update very soon!


Fair writing,


Earwen

*whimpers* Not fair! You're evil for leaving it there! I want more. Please? I love your writing style, and it has a really good storyline. More! More!

*waves back to Donovan Stryfe and smiles*

Yay, a new chapter! (A WONDERFUL new chapter!) Update soon -- I have to know about this tower now!