rate_review Reviews

That was great. I want to see more now. More, More and More. You're awesome.

Wow! I had A lot of reading to catch up on. You are amazingly fast. This is great. I just got back from watching the movie too so it is kind of like an instant sequel! You capture plot so well and sigh, I love how your mind works with the love scenes. To think, that something like sexual contact could be taken to something so deep. I'm in love with Tumnus all over again if that is even possible.



Butterz!!

Hugz and kisses!!!

I decided to go ahead and read this. I read Narnia once but that was a long time ago. I didn't think I could understand or remember the characters. I didn't have problems. You described them so well that I didn't need to remember much. I am just now on chapter seven but that is a good chapter. I think Iwill re read it. I'll review again when I finish it.

see im an author...to um no stories though lol

To all my readers.

This isn't a writing contest and I am not in competition with the other lucy/Tumnus fic on here. liesel? If You're going to compare me to them like that..and possibly ruin other people away from reading mine by said comparison...PLEASE don't Post reviews stating your opinion! That was terribly rude and inconsiderate of you.

Starfyre

I have been a bad fan and have not reviewed. Allow me the chance to correct that hanus misdeed. I shall have to leave a few just to make up for the chapters I have read and did not pay to see. I really like this story and the plot you have happening in it. Ot has great foreshadowing. Deep plot that ties in with all the books and an even deeper relationship that is developing with the two main charracters. Then you turn around and add a developed enemy. You don't just throw in some random monster and have them attack. They are planned and the enemy is great by the way. That is a very good concept. Darker shadows of the real self. There is so much going on in your story that it isn't just straight forward Line A goes to point B and point B goes to Plot end C, Like some of the other fics on here. I won't mention them because that wouldn't be the right thing to do. Keep writing. I really do enjoy this. Expect another review with the next chapter from me.


Cameron

Sweet. Now you can list favorite stories though. **nods**

And I still am very curious about the tower. **nods, ponders possibility and probability of getting one of the two crowns**

>Please start reviewing more. I'm begininng to think no one likes what they are reading here.

Rubbish! Of course we like it! Keep going, it's great!

PLEASE KEEP UPDATING! I am in love with this story and I absolutely hate Narnia fanfics. (however, Tumnus saying "wow" is very strange.) If you need a beta-reader, let me know and i can help.

Liz (lizzytheimmortal@hotmail.com)

:O oh my god! That is...Ah!! I am speechless woman! And don;t you dare quit on me because no one is reviewing. i am! lol update soon!


Fair Writing,

Earwen/Maeg