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for She Did Not Go.

by dark1starr

person Earwen
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, that was beautiful. It almost made me cry.That was definately not smut, that WAS love and it was beautifully written.

I'm very curious as to who this little boy is though......hmmmm.... please update soon!

Fair Writing,

Earwen
person Maxine
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story just keeps getting better and better! The plot is progressiing nicely, I'm really looking forward to what's going to happen. The love scene was so sexy and sweet at the same time. This is still one of the best Lucy/Tumnus fics I've read. I'll be checking back frequently for more updates. Until then, I'm going to read the whole thing again. It's just that good.
person alaksandra
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so sweet...actually the sweetest first time I've ever read. *squeels* that was sooo sweet!!!!!!
person Earwen
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO!!! OH NO!!!!Damn all evilness in Narnia! This chapter was very good! Please update soon! I hope you come out fo your slump soon, i know how you feel as i am the same with my Charlie and the Chocolate Factory story i am writing. But please@ Pull yourself out and write write write!!!!


I will do a thousand reviews if i have to lol


Fair Writing!

Earwen
person TumnusIsLove
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! I hope you update soon, i really like your writing.


TumnusIsLove
person Valiant
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! Update soon.

Yours,

Valiant
person FOB Rocks!
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story! Update soon.
person Maxine
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I've been looking for good Lucy/Tumnus fics for a while, and this is easily the best I've read so far. The characterization is perfect, especialy for Tumnus. The romance is developing nicely, which I like. It's all just so sweet and wonderful. I can't wait for the next instalments!
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, Aslan! Don't send Lucy away!

Great chapter. Loved this line, "You have a very noble heart, Mr. Tumnus."

That he does. That he does.

~The Amazing Enthusiasto~

PS: Thanks for the updates. Keep them coming!
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked what you got going here so far. I was only able to read up to Ch.3 so far but I shall read more later. I think it would be interesting if you changed Tumnus's faun legs into human legs.
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