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for She Did Not Go.

by dark1starr

person Earwen
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear...i hope all goes well in the end. What a brilliant idea though, Aslan's brother! That's genius really! lol Please update soon! You are doing wonderfully even without the beta'd version! Honest!

Fair Writing,

Earwen/Maeg
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, i have to admit i am in a bit of shock. an actual story, and not two or three sentences before we have the involved characters naked and sweaty in some badly written rehashed porn nightmare. kudoos to you. ~bows~
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Adorable chapter. I'm glad that Aslan saw that this is true love.

~The Amazing Enthusiasto
person Roisin
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are worse than the Witch - torturing us. I want to know what our Aslan is going to say - and it was a very sweet chapter to say the least. Don't keep us waiting!
person -dragon-
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7. Bloody brilliant. Well written, thought out, and not rushes at all. Very believable, and quite worth the wait.
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**whistles and holds up bic, waving arm slowly from side to side**

Though think you need to tell your beta to hurry up. **snickers**
person Earwen
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*jumps insanely with excitement* AHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!!! That was so wonderful! thank you! you made it beautiful and romantic, no tartiness at all! This chapter was awesome! update soon! i love this story! you rock!


Fair Writing!

Earwen/Maeg
person sumak
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm a black lion that is aslans enemy...well gotta love those sibling rivalries lol and * clears throat* tumnus got some booty tumnus got some booty tumnus got some booty now lets see what happens next hehe so i think we all know the drill by now
person Earwen
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH YES! they are together! How wonderful! It made me all squishy inside! Please update soon and you'd better not seperate them now or boot her out of Narnia or i'll beat you, i swear i will. lol

Update soon!


Fair Writing,

Earwen
person MarieMJS
schedule January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was so glad to see not one but TWO chapters to read today, the love revelation was absolutely cute, and so many things happened already... Its fantastic to see Aslan again, and hopefully we won't have to wait too long to read what's going on with the two thrones, and what's next for the two lovebirds(gonna check AFFN every day!!!)... Great Job!
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