rate_review Reviews

I like this one, too! Very poetic.

Pretty good. It had to be if I bothered to review.

I love drabbles. The current rating (3 stars) isn't quite deserved. I understand that some may be quite confused by this ficlet, but you've done a good job, in my opinion.

The detail and poetry that you've packed in between those two lines of the movie is awesome. As for the complaints about "not enough sex" I believe you have more than hinted at an adult relationship. The lines about a grown woman peering out from child's eyes, they details in brackets, it indicates that there was something worth reading into. I am of the idea that for a fic to be "adult" it doesn't have to be "explicit."

Great Job.

~AmazingEnthusiasto~

I like this pairing... well, the hints of it you give in this wee story. I want more. Poor Lucy, poor Tumnus. And I can't remember from reading the books in my childhood - do they get back together?

But, where is the SEX?! It is ADULT fan fiction dot net, you know. If you turn this into a longer piece (and I think you should) then I want some raunchy faun-human action (maybe Tumnus finds himself drawn to Edmund?! Just to add that element of ANGST that all hot sexbloits need) - otherwise stop waisting everyone's time with these ridiculously short sexless prose poems. Go back to art school!

It's got a good start will there be more? I hope so. I think you've got a good set up please write more I'd like to read it. thank you.

thank you for reviewing. mena, the notes state quite clearly that the story is PG. if you don't want to "waste your time," i suggest you use your discretion. as for the writing being "teen level," i wonder if you mean to imply that adults do nothing but screw like bunnies every waking minute and have no feelings other than lust?

That was very poignant...almost like a poem. I really enjoyed it!

Post PG rated stuff on other sites; this site is for hard R and higher ratings. You're wasting our time with this teen level writing.

good story