rate_review Reviews

Yes, truly excellent. One might even say fantastic.

I thought was excellent! I loved the combination of smut and typical Discworld humor was very well done.

This is the first Discworld fic on this site that I read and enjoyed in a non-ironic way. Bravo! The humour was spot-on (insofar as any of us can reach Terry's standards XD) and although there were minor canon errors (eg - IIRC, the fine lace is Sto Helit lace [Soul Music]) are tiny and only of interest to a nazi canonist like me (...then again with such a large and occasionally-contradictory canon...XD) and didn't detract from the fic at all. I loved it, and it's DEFINATELY not often I say that about a fic with any kind of OC in it. And if this was your first submission, I can't wait to see more from you, since you clearly have a lot of talent.

Fantastic! Are you Terry Pratchett in disguise? Writing fanfiction so you can do the steamy sex you can't do in the real books?! This was just great, absolutely..... christ, I've got no words to describe how good this was! Favourite phrase: 'and protoccol ran giggling into the night with it's underwear on it's head'. And the sex! It was like actually being there :) great tone, great tension, fantastic description. I'm going to see if you've written more now :)

The story was really funny! I never thought of Drumknott as of a person who can have sex, but you made it work. Vetinari really employs only professionals =D And all the little details make it sound rerally Discworld - strawberry wobbler... =DDD

This fic had me giggling at the title, and kept me giggling the whole way through.. much like that unfortunate clerk you mentioned (excellent Vetinari there, "... you know how I feel about gigglers."). Jeez, there are so many little details I adore, too many to name, so just- Good Job.

You kept the atmosphere of the Discworld, with smut! I applaud you, as it is something I could never do :*(
Keep writing, I shall follow your career with interest (! or . or nothing at all, decide which one suits you best.)

Excellent!!!! Great to read a story that fits the mythos and yet gives up some much-needed smut.

Thanks, mate.

-HighSign

Well, how lovely!
I believe you did an excellent job getting the atmosphere of the Discworld in hand- while tap dancing off with the sensibilities of its creator :)
Congratulations!

This is the most amazing fanfiction story I have read. I was going to add "in months" but that would be wrong. It's the most amazing ever. It felt here and there as though PTerry himself had written it. I actually laughed out loud reading it. The sexy part was also well written.

A few special mentions of what I found hilarious in it:
- Drumknott's description - Terry himself couldn't have done a better job
- the giggling clerk in the scorpion pit
- the capitalisations "Good at His Job", "Job to Do"
- Vetinari - you got him so right. Please consider writing a story about him. One just as funny and spicy.
- the Terminator reference "a naked man strolling into a bar and demanding clothes, boots, and a motorcycle, before beating everyone up"
- the poem of the unknown Quirmish bard
- the always popular sonkies

You kept it funny, kept the style of the books, and, as a huge Discworld nut, you did a fantastic job! I could not be more hopeful to find more of your stories soon.

Thank you for "Talk Nerdy to Me"! Absoultly wonderful.