rate_review Reviews

I like, I seriously like this. This is really cute, very comically realistic. I love awkward Willy, so hopefully after this whole ordeal, he'll become pervy Willy ;)

this was pretty good! I usually just read slash, but I certainly don't let that make me discrimate against other gernes. ;)
I ususally don't like the straight sex stories for this movie/book series, because they usually inolve:
1. Mrs.Bucket (don't like stories where people cheat on thier husbands/wives, and not to metion Mrs.Bucket and Willy wonka doesn't seem like they go together)
2. one of the two underaged girls from the book/movie series... (dont like those girls. lolicon..yeech.)
3. An marysue depecting the Author's fantasies about the chocolatier.

So way to go.. you were actually oringal! And even better? It's actually inspired from an actual scene in the movie as opposed to an competely made up scene.

ROFl... poor Willy! That last was a naughty trick... let's just leave this here copy of the Kama Sutra out, and watch the (mostly) innocent (and hot) chocolatier turn all red! HEE!
Write more!

Wow, that was really well written! Can't wait to see how it turns out!

You tease!!!!!!

Oh, no need to rush! The story is going great. I like it better when there's no rush to have Wonka having sex, because that's how it would be. Slowly, getting him used to things. Slowly adapting. This is currently the fic that I get more anxious about seeing a new chapter.
But take as long as you have to. It's great.
Again, thank you for writing something about Young!Wonka. X3

Oh yay, an update! :)
I'm really liking this story a lot. I can't wait to read about Willy's next lesson.;)

Like Willy Wonka, I'm also looking forward to more! You're whetting my appetite quite effectively - I soooo look forward to the next episode!

Good stuff!

Ahh! Finish this story! It's so well written, not some crappy bad grammar, poorly described sugar high tale. I can't wait to see how Willy takes this!

I sure hope you continue this one!!!!