schedule
January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOAH!! That was GREAT you are ALWAYS so good at writting these kinds of stories, maybe you should consider writing professionaly!
schedule
January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit.
schedule
January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, but still needing some action. It's a bit monotone... nothing happens. Or it's yet to come? Sorry, you asked for reviews.... But the way you write is very interesting.
schedule
January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There is nothing wrong with happy!
you develop the feelings wonderfully!
You can happy things and still have action!
you develop the feelings wonderfully!
You can happy things and still have action!
schedule
January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't know... it's beautiful so far, but there is some action missing... I mean, the story could finish just now. Everything is all right, they are happy.,,
schedule
January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! She loves him. *dances* LOOK I'm reviewing, so go update. NOW!
schedule
January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was probably my most favorite chapter so far. You did an excellent job portraying Michelle's feelings toward Erik, along with his reluctance to allow himself to fully love her. I look forward to experiencing all his emotions as he reveals more of himself to Michelle, as well as watching the development of their relationship. It's better to go slow, that way we can savor the pleasure of watching them learn more about each other as they allow more of their true personalities to show. Well done!
schedule
January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
keep going.you are doing good!
he is so vulnerable
let her make him happy and not just for a month
he is so vulnerable
let her make him happy and not just for a month
schedule
January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very good
schedule
January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it