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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good please tell me you will have them get a happy ever after. Also I was wondering if you would help me with my writing. I have a story kinda like this but I would have to explain it if you are interested in helping me e-mail me at Shaylee2010@aol.com
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is good please tell me you will have them get a happy ever after. Also I was wondering if you would help me with my writing. I have a story kinda like this but I would have to explain it if you are interested in helping me e-mail me at Shaylee2010@aol.com
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IF YOU DO GIVE UP ON THIS FIC CAN I CONTINUE IT FOR YOU PLEASE OR PLEASE UPDATE DON'T LET IT DISAPEAR INTO THE WORLD OF UNFINISHED FICS
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September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOO. You cant leave it at that. You have to update soon. I hope Susan and the baby are ok and return to narnia. Please tell me your not going to give up on this story. It's just too good. How dare Aslan take away Edmunds, Lucy's and espeacially Peter's memmory's of Susan. Oh PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE update soon. Love the story. And if you like Peter and Susan storys check out my story called. 'A Love Thats Forbidded' Its on Fanfiction.net oh and my arthor's name is, Aminuleen. Once again please UPDATE A.S.A.P.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why would anyone in this time and place use the word "gods"???? That makes no sense and it's very anachronistic and yanked me out of this story and straight into modern day Harry Potter. And BTW God is a proper Name with a capital G; the word "gods" is always lower case as it refers to many things. btw what is with the HUGE spaces in between sentences? The writing isn't bad but finding it is hard.
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!! Harriet is...creepy. But wow...Peter's a womanizer? interesting.....and Susan..poor Susan..
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June 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very nice job. I can't wait for more!!
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February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story... I've often wondered how Susan ended up when her whole family died, or as Aslan would say, removed from the Shadowlands... Hope you update soon... and I hope that this has a happy ending...
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! More! More! Please update soon!
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is just amazing. I love the chronicles of narnia and its diffcult to find a well written fanfic and so i am very glad to have found this one. Please continue writing and update soon, very soon, like now preferably. lol. just joking no pressure well actually just a wee bit o' pressure.