rate_review Reviews

for The Lost Queen

by roguey17

person Liliana
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
About bloody time! You'd better not make us wait so long for another update - and I want that smut!
person paulethier
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good, just one thing. I've read the books that show a christian perspective of narnia. Aslan said he could not punish Peter since he was innocent. And that Susan was almost as evil as Eve. Well Adam and Eve were both punished. Adam because he was not storng as he should have been in resisting Eve's temptation. So I do believe that Aslan would have punished Peter in your story. But its still interesting.
person Anon
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!
person Lyndzi
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is the first narnia fic I've ever read, and you've tottally got me hooked :) Poor Susan.. i've allways wondered what happened to her after TLB.
person Kaitriona
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is promising development - Peter Pevensie, King of Narnia, Man Whore! Please update soon - so many unanswered questions!
person swivelchair
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. I like it. Can you email me when you update? I'd like to know what happens next. It's really exciting, this story of yours. Cheers! :)
person paulethier
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is great so far, just that I think something is missing, I dont know what.
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate cliff-hangers, but I do so love where this story is going. I hope you update soon.
person Requiem
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man, I much as I want to hate all Peter/Susan (I OTP Peter/Edmund) I love this! It's so well written, and Susan is so. . . Painful. But not in a bad way, the way she feels, you convey it perfectly. *purrs* Yummy XD
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I think I've found a replacment for the last story I was following on this site (finished now). I'll definitely be reading this one. Keep up the good work.
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