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This is sooo sweet and lovely, if only love could be like that in real life. More please, it is really good and i love it. Please more :)

THIS FANFIC IS FANTASTIC!!!

Just had to say that before I read the next chapter...

VOLUME 1? How is this going to continue? I'm not done yet, but my heart is already broken in little pieces! Please write more quick and let this have a happy ending! This is torture, I'm telling you!

I'm sorry, but this was so happy and sweet, I don't think I can read Volume 2 or 3. It's just too much for me. I guess I'm like Peter; I can't handle anymore sadness. Maybe it's because I've lost people in life, and unlike Peter I can't save my loved ones or bring them back, even for a while. I know how Peter felt, when he was in grief. So I'm going to leave my reading and review here, once and for all.

This was a fantastic fanfic. It was full of emotion. You characterized them all well. I got to see more behind Susan, and the limit of Lucy's love, and so much of Peter and Edmund. I love Edmund's cheekiness, and his awesomeness as the black knight. I even enjoyed Princess Pretty Eyes. Aslan, who is difficult to write, sounded natural in your writing. And you described things well so I could picture them.

In fact, it was all so captivating, I was captured by it so, that I don't even mind the lack of smut.

Bravo, bravo!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! When will the rest of Volume 2 and 3 be on this site? I don't how long I can go without them. Please keep writing and posting this masterpiece!

That was one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've read in a long while! PLEASE tell me you're still writing this.

Damn you! I don't see posting dates, but if you ended the story here... I'll be quite furious with you!

You've actually got the writer's flair for foreshadowing and shocking the readers. I had gotten to the point where I thought you had straightened Peter out. Then you brought in Ed once again and I was all like... BWAAaaaAAAAH! YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT! *melts and turns into a pile of brain mush*

You're also quite evil with sexual tension. Only downside is that I have a feeling that if you do or would have written sex scenes, it wouldn't have been my taste. I've come to get used to extremely graphic and crude language laced with high levels of sexual explicitness and all that fun stuff. =D

If you see this, I don't mind being emailed to be old if you write more chapters... Evil writer. *mutters to self*

This story made me cry so many times I'm not sure If I can even believe a happy ending is comming their way. I'm just besides myself with anxiety about what the future holds. this story is so insanely well crafted, an emotional roller coaster of love and loss. And though I am incredibly thrilled with how things are going now- I will be holding my breath until chapter nine.

oh my god you have to write more! THis is heartbreaking! Damn you! Your attention to the world of Narnia and the two boys is magnificent (but Peter, how could you be so slow?! nooo!).

I want to know what happens next! Is there hope, somehow?? More, more! Please!

ooh,there are more chapters! oh my gosh, this fic is so good! I love it! yess!