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In the most honest and genuine of terms, I tell you...I have said to some that their stories are the elite, the top, the best.

But never, in my entire life of reading, reviewing and writing stories, have I come across one such as this.
Your warning said to bring tissues, I didn't believe I would need any.
Oh how I was wrong.
This story drew me into the depths of agony and to the upmost skies of bliss. I was connected so deeply to every chapter, every sentence, every MOMENT..that I could feel physically ill, sick, and in anguish.
When I was done, I took another moment to cry, laugh, and then breathe life in a different way.
Even now as I have finished, taken a break and thought, I can feel a pain similar to a dagger near my heart. Peter's pain was so accurately portrayed, so real, that I now must draw myself out of it.
Would you please post the other volumes to this? I'd like to hear what you think. Please, feel free to send me an email.

You ARE the best. I promise you, NOTHING can stand in comparison to this.

Above all else, thank you for capturing them. Perfectly.

Hello! Wonderful story, and I've also read Lest We Forget, and I had to say that it was a tear-jerker for me. I'm very interested to read the other two chronicles that you've mentioned at the end of Just and Magnificent, and if it's possible, please send it to sveigonmalfoy@hotmail.com. Once more, congratulations on a story that's magnificently written and thanks in advance.

I love it! Please publish the other two volumes. I'm just dying to see what happens next.

that was totally awwwwesome! I loved that last cliffhanger, and am really interested in the other volumes you talked about. Keep writing!

Ahhhhhhhh!!! Oh! This is maybe the best fic I've ever read! You are SUCH an amazing writer. I got all pulled into this story. I was getting anxious so many times about Edmund's comings and goings and for poor Peter's despair. EEEE! And I LOVED the end. I would love to see more of this. My gosh, this was amazing. Yes, I did cry a few times. Ha ha ha! Awww.....

I just finished reading all of this, and there was so much I wanted to say, but I can't remember it all. Besides I'm not sure if anything I did say could do justice to this story. And will say is that this was really beautiful and unbelievably great, I really do want to read the other two volumes.

Wow, this is the first time i read a narnia's fic and frankly,
so far i think this is the best fic ever!!!!
I'm really looking foward the 2nd and the 3rd volume.
I'd just realise that im addicted to this fic and beleive me,
i'd cried so many times over this fic.
It really touches my soul...!!

I can't wait to read the final chapter of this volume and I can't wait to begin reading the sequel (if there's going to be one, lol). Keep up the magnificent work with all of your fics.~Sophia

this is amazing. i don't think i even have any constructive criticism because there's nothing to criticize. incredibly sad, and it should be disturbing, but it wasn't. thanks for writing this- it made my day. i can't wait for the conclusion. much love.
~moi

I absolutely do hate you for killing Edmund! :P How could you!
Kay, I'm gonna tell you a little secret. I cried. Seriously. I'm completely dried out. I liked the end because it was so damn sad and the way you wrote it was heartbreaking. Good job, I'm dying (haha) to read the next chapter!