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June 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One of the most moving and intense stories I have ever read. I cannot wait until the next chapter!! PLEASE update soon, this is the most exciting story I've ever read!!!! You are a fantastic writer, drawing in readers easily and efficiently!!! Great work!! FYI-Adore the way Peter is, you write him very well!! Awesome story please update soon!!!!
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April 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Magnificent chapter and I really love how this is developing. I can't wait to read more; I love all the emotion in this story. Keep up the extremely excellent work.~Sophia
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April 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written! I love the way you have developed this story and I really can't wait to read more. Keep up the very good work and please update soon.~Sophia
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April 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!! Let me guess, you wrote the script for the movie? It fit so well into place. I loved it!! But one thing, The part with Edmund ready to give himself up, I dont think Jadis would have glady taken him. She would be too content with having Aslan than to take Ed.
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April 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that was soooooooooooooo sad. how exactly are you gonna continue this? I cant wait to see because this is an awesome start.