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for Slave to His Whim

by Pyrite

schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pssst... Chapter 3 and Chapter 4 are the same. Chapter 4 repeated Chapter 3. Just to let you know. Like the story thus far.
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
umm whats with chap 31 i dont get it? :S
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you story! I just came a crossed it yesterday and read all of it...But I think you skipped a part in between chapters 30 and 31.
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im really confused about ch. 31...it doesnt flow right....update again soon
person Cymbidium
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great story. A cruel Erik, yet strong and very sexy. Great descriptions of both Malika and Erik and what they were feeling. Erik raping Malika was hot. I hope you update.
person nobody
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um, she's not a virgin if he's had her. "Good my little virgin?" Yeah, she's not a virgin anymore.
Duhr.
person conncoll06
schedule May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update soon please...what an awesome story!!!
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