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for A New Beginning

by Lum

person Onitsu Blackfeather
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has been a pretty good story so far. I look forward to any new chapters. And I realized that for the black servants they'd have an accent. And with how you have Ummi she sounds accurate enough. Oh and on chapter ten i think erik extinguished the match not distinguished it right?
person daygonna
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, id almost lost hope when it came to another chapter. i really hope u update soon. this really is an amazing story.
person jetuke
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just love it, don't stop and update soon, please. Two thumbs up!
person Rosamund
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Glad you finally updated...I've been waiting! But don't check as regularly cos every time have to give me signature (sigh). Too short! Please write more soon...so Ummi notices and told her...interesting! Was worried about the farmer boy, but no more. where was daddy going? and what was Erik doing out riding?
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story! You are a wonderful writer. You don't rush the story, or forget details that are important! Please, write more! I can't wait to see what happens!
person avanell
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story...what update list? Do you have one? Or is this posted at ffnet? Please let me know! I can't believe after a whole month of checking (after I first found this story after your early sept post) I forgot and missed this chapter! Can't wait for more...still hoping that christing and raoul make it to america some day...would love for them to see erik happy and eventually with this american spirit :)
person avanell
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oops...here's my e-mail in case :)
person Avanell
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm really intrigued by this...can't wait for more!
person debra
schedule August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
was happy to see an update to this story. looking forward to more. dd
person Marie
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating!
I think it's good that Erik has overheard the converstion between Madison and her father. Erik now knows what he is up against and why Madison is so hostile.
Madison's father did say that she could marry anyone she wanted. She just needs to find someone she wants to marry and then she won't mind getting married.
Very good chapter!
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