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Thanx for mentioning me in your credits. I am honored.

"Herein you'll find a (chapterstarringcrazy)-Erik who's talking to himself, trying to figure out all that's happening to him. Think of him as something like the Gollum with extra points for being so hunky!"

=LOLLOLLOLLOLfallsoutofherchairstilllaughing=

Look forward to reading your latest chapters.

Date with an Angel data:

If u like. If not, kewl.

In my humble opinion, this is a wonderful 80s movie. In it, God sends an angel to collect an ill gentleman. The gentleman doesnt know that hes dying. He simply tolerates his headaches, lets his gf boss him around and dictate his life, and he parties with his boys. His buddies kidnap him from his engagement party at his gf's father's house. They throw a bachelor party at his place. Along the way to his house, the angel gets knocked out by a satellite. She falls into the gent's pool (like Shymalan's Lady Of The Lake). He rescues her. They fall in love. The gf comes over, finds them together. NOT GOOD. Suddenly, everyone from the gf, to her father, to hero's buddies and family, chase after the hero and heroine. They want to use the angelic heroine in their devious plans. The hero simply wants to send her back to Heaven. The heroine simply wants to stay with him...down here on Earth...kissing, adopting animals, and munching french fries forever and ever.

***Scene in story***

=Gf drives away madly in her car. Hero is bummed that she took off. The angel, wrapped in a his blanket, stands at the door of his house, smiling at him.
He tells her gently, Get back inside. She continues smiling at him. He yells, GET BACK INSIDE!!! She obeys and trips. He rushes inside to help her up. She smiles at him=

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http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0092834/

http://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B00005UW7U/102-7859233-4952112?v=glance&n=130

http://www.rottentomatoes.com/m/date_with_an_angel/

http://movies2.nytimes.com/gst/movies/movie.html?v_id=12455

http://movies.msn.com/movies/movie.aspx?m=158954

http://movie-reviews.colossus.net/movies/d/date_angel.html

"Female curiosity is a power no man will ever be able to control no matter how hard he tries."


=LOLLOLLOLLOL=

‘A few stolen kisses is all we shared.’

‘You didn’t steal those kisses. She kissed you back.’

=LOL=

‘You abducted her!’

‘But then I let her go!’

‘Then why hold it against her if she simply took the escape route you gave her?’

NOTE TO ERIK: Next time you kidnap a woman, DO NOT show her the exit signs.

In Married With Children, Kelly Bundy, a lovely, but lack-witted, young lady, could never find the exit signs. Why?

She thought the exit signs really were "EXCITE" signs.

=LOL=

More info on Date With An Angel:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qIEcBvgGn4s

Done reading the first chapter. So far, so good. I liked that Erik acknowledged his errors, resolved to better himself, had faith in hope, etc. I like the references to Dante's works.

“Good afternoon, monsieur”, greeted him Vincent, his butler.

This phrase sounds okay. Yet at the same time, it does not. Keep it or correct it, if u like.

I could be wrong, but you may need commas in some sentences.

“I told you to wait!” his deep voice reverberated in the grand hallway.

She mentally shook herself and spoke with as much conviction as she could muster. “I do not follow orders Monsieur. I thought this insignificant detail would have become apparent to you by now.”

She turned on her heel, grasping the door mantle hurriedly, frantic to get as far away from this man as possible. However, before she realized it, an arm snaked its way around her waist and her body was crushed to his hard length.

“You will learn that when I make a request of you, you are not to question me.” he hissed in her ear.

O_o!!!

=Fans herself and faints=