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for No Easy Way

by secretlysecretly

person BRP
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Get a hold of yourself Erik! You are no longer the Phantom of the Opera Populaire. You left the Opera House behind to leave him behind. To leave that part of yourself behind. How did this happen? I’m better than this. I came here to prove to myself that I’m better than this."

Wow...

What an inspiring mantra...

I still struggle with my life. As does a close friend of mine. The whole world does. But we have to keep going, and never give up...



person BRP
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I behaved like the Phantom that I once was...all of this was brought on by a woman."

:P How many of us women want Erik to behave like so around us? =Raises hand= WOOHOO!!!
person BRP
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"As she approached the lake, she could feel her temper cooling. This had always been her favorite place whenever she felt sad or stressed by something. It had been her haven time and time again ever since she had been a little girl. Reaching the lakeshore she heard the water splashing, immediately alarmed as she realized she wasn’t alone. Tentatively, she peered through the reeds and saw a man’s head coming out of the water."

O_O!!! =Gets out her binoculars=

Ooooo...

DANG!!! HES...WHOA...Talk about the one of the natural wonders of the world!!!
person BRP
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The lake/ogling scene reminds me of a similar one in "Date With An Angel." In that movie, the human hero ogles the angel heroine swimming in a lake. Then a plant's branch smacks him for being so cheeky. =LOL=
person BRP
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I never would have expected something like that from her. Was it mere curiosity for a male body, or was it directed at me? I would certainly do the same if the roles were reversed and I had the pleasure of watching her alabaster skin glistening in the sun. Then he smiled."

O_o!!!

=Fans herself and faints=


person BRP
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...por...Dios...

They...kissed.

=Fans herself and faints=

person BRP
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"The people around him didn’t regard him with fear or repulsion; they simply accepted him as if he were a common man."

In those days, nobles didnt accept common people. Common people had to curtsy to them, but not vice versa. Nobles only greeted each other. I get what you're saying in this sentence. But how about changing the comman man part? If u like...
person BRP
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"I am not sure as to what your expectations of me were my dear, but if I were a boorish man who views women as mindless, helpless creatures lacking the power, and even worse the will, to wield their lives as they please, you will find that your notion couldn’t be further from the truth.” he simply stated."

I could be wrong, but...didnt Erik believe this while he was courting Christine? Didnt he try to control her? Didnt he relish controlling her? Not that he hurt her, but still.

Or, after going through the ordeal with her, he changed his mind?


person BRP
schedule July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?! The story ends there?! No!!!

Please, please update soon.

person EternalxDarkness
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so good! please continue right away!
=D
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