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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
excellent. Just...
pure excellence.
pure excellence.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
he drifted his eyes to where Marianne was standing...no...how about his eyes drifted to where...
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
before h(e) returned to her again, sitting beside her on the mattress and reaching out to caress her brow tenderly.
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Downstairs, Raoul sat on a sofa in the adjoining salon to the dining room, his face buried in his hands as everything that had transpired...
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Downstairs, Raoul sat on a sofa in the adjoining salon to the dining room, his face buried in his hands as everything that had transpired...
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
on vulgar women, liquor(,) and gambling.
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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O!!! Wow. Shocking new chapter! So...what will happen to Christine afterwards? Since she is barren, will she still get money?
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O OMG!!! please update soon!!! That was amazing!!!!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh...
Oh man.. I'm hooked.
Please continue!
Oh man.. I'm hooked.
Please continue!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Some sentences need commas. Some scenes seemed rushed. Please edit them, if you see fit.
What a beautiful confession of love! I_I
What a beautiful confession of love! I_I
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November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was scared for a moment, I thought Erik wouldn't give in. Good thing he did, I'd have to riot!
Continue when you can, its all getting good. =)
Continue when you can, its all getting good. =)
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O!!! VA A TERMINAR SU VIDA?! NO!!!