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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderous chapter, I must say. Rauol was never a favorite character of mine, but in this story, he's working his way up.
Please continue on when you can.
Please continue on when you can.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“What kind of talk is that? I would like nothing more than for you to accompany me on my walk.” (h)er smile was radiant as she stood from the bed and started dressing.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O_O!!!
OMG!
Christine es una bruja y puta!
=LOL=
Excellent new chappy, as always.
OMG!
Christine es una bruja y puta!
=LOL=
Excellent new chappy, as always.
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God you ladies totally rock!!!! its a pity you dont update more...its hard to keep up the momentum...Brava!!!
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh... this story is so wonderful. I've just begun to read it, and its captured my complete interest. Please, continue when you can =)
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that you are amazing! I have been waiting for her to tell someone about it, but she has just been too stuborn! Why can people never see when their own doom is coming towards them? I almost cried a couple times in these last chapters, and I hope that you update soon!
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter was torturously beautiful. And evil.
If you hadn't already promised a happy ending I should have been very cross.
If you hadn't already promised a happy ending I should have been very cross.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-_-! Why didn't Erik kidnap his Marianne and give her a good spanking? Sheesh.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"The carriage bearing the De Chagny crest came to a halt in front of the Pinon grand mansion. Raoul raised his eyes to look at the majestic building as the memories of his last visit to his cousin’s estate flooded his mind. Almost two months had passed since those awkward events that had separated him from Marianne in a rather bitter way and made him doubt not only his dear wife but also himself for the first time.
Raoul had asked himself many a time if he had been nothing but a mere pawn in this complicated game. He didn’t really care for all the other players of this strange game though; his wife, his loving beautiful wife, Christine, had been his only thought all along. He was unable to resist her charms, he had been in love with her ever since he had been a young boy. A mere look from her, and he would forget everything."
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Raoul had asked himself many a time if he had been nothing but a mere pawn in this complicated game. He didn’t really care for all the other players of this strange game though; his wife, his loving beautiful wife, Christine, had been his only thought all along. He was unable to resist her charms, he had been in love with her ever since he had been a young boy. A mere look from her, and he would forget everything."
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“I wonder how you can sleep at night(s).”