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The poor dear...

she knew she was done (fore). For?

WOW.
First, it started so hotly. O_O!
Next, it ended so sadly. !_!

How heart-wrenching when one goes through the break-up and rebound stages.

He's going to kidnap her, isn't he?

BTW, what happened to Raoul and Christine?

"His fingers were caressing the ivory keys of his organ ever so gently when he suddenly sensed a strange tension run through his body, making him press down on the keys fiercely, interrupting the melancholy melody violently.
Erik frowned and buried his face in his hands. Frustration washed over him as he allowed his gaze to wander over the elegant objects around him. When he had purchased the mansion, he had decided almost immediately on the use of this particular space to be turned into a music room. It would be one of the few things in his new environment which would solemnly remind him of his tempestuous past. He had even covered the large windows with heavy black drapes, so that he could pretend he was still in his old home whenever he felt the need to drown in his solitude."

Maybe separate these two paragraphs? Or, are they one?

"Yet, no… He couldn’t commit the same mistake twice. There would be nothing more that he would like at the moment than to go and take her away from Olivier Dervaux."

GASP! Why ever NOT?!

Sigh...

“Carry on with my life? How dare you, you… harlot!” he caught up with her in two strides and his words had the desired effect, making her freeze on the spot. O_O!!!

“What life are you talking about? You have ruined me!" Marianne "ruined" Erik. =LOL=

Oooo...

Erik's on the rebound. =LOL=

I am totally captivated by the story!!! I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next...I keep thinking that I am going to see a variation of Masquerade, where Erik rips the chain from Christine's neck...I dont know how you would incorporate that, but it would rock!!! Thank you ladies so much for creating this awesome story!!!

I love you. I worship you. I have just been in the fandom, what two days, as I stumbled across your fic. It is wonderful. Compelling plot and beautifully written to boot, which is the most important element of fic of any kind. Please, please write more, make it better goddamnit! the situation, I mean, not the fic. I think Marianne may be my favourite OC of all time.
A small thing that bothered me was that an inteligent woman such as Marianne would not think of the possibility of telling Eric about what the snake made her do and simply leaving, going away somewhere, a place where he or the law will never find them. Especially after she new about the baby. Surely she must realize the baby can never be safe with Olivier around, no matter what he says. I suppose it was nesesary for the story, but it just bothered me, so I thought I'd mention it.
Anyway, great fic and I am eagerly awaiting more.