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August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really happy you finished this! I loved the journey and the characters. The ending was perfect.
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I think you did an excellent job with this story - I think it flowed seamlessly with Golding’s novel and kept the personalities of the original characters consistent. You have a great use of detail and description, the plot is continuous and engaging, and your dialogue believable. A delight to read, thank-you!
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July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i guess this is the end. I like how it turned out for the two of them, on the island that left them struggling with fears for many years. I like it
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been a huge fan of Lord of the Flies for who knows how long, and a huge slash fan, as well.
But it wasn't until I read this that I really started to understand what good slash-writing is.
Beautiful, insightful, sometimes even heart-breakingly beautiful; you've captured the true essence of their relationship, for sure.
I truly hope that you'll write more, dear.
But it wasn't until I read this that I really started to understand what good slash-writing is.
Beautiful, insightful, sometimes even heart-breakingly beautiful; you've captured the true essence of their relationship, for sure.
I truly hope that you'll write more, dear.
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May 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story! Although I haven't finished the actual book yet, this is still the best fanfiction I've read on LOTF so far! Please continue!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see that you had updated this! I absolutely adore this story - you are doing such a good job with the characters and everything. Hope you post again soon!
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Plese continue ^-^
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ralph and his conflictions!
I'm most intrigued to see what will happen when they go to the island, will it give them closure? Or is it angst all the way? ;]
Can't wait for the next update! I pretty much check AFF everyday for new chapters *blushes* =D
I'm most intrigued to see what will happen when they go to the island, will it give them closure? Or is it angst all the way? ;]
Can't wait for the next update! I pretty much check AFF everyday for new chapters *blushes* =D
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i didnt like Lord of the Flies untill i read this. whooo, you had me so into the story. its so well written and i'm really loving it. please continue to update. atleast untill you reach the story because you cant leave us hanging like this! good job. :)
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Incoherant babblings* Wow...just...wow. I love LOTF but I love this story even more :D
Can't wait to see what happens next!
Can't wait to see what happens next!