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Poor Ralph, someone should bake him some cookies. Little star and planet shaped cookies.

I love this fic! The imagery is so vivid and the emotions so raw. Every sentance is perfect; nothing seems out of place. You just have such a great handle on the characters and their dynamic. Next chapter pretty-please-with-a-cherry-on-top :D

Looooooooove this story, next chapter please!!!

Updateupdateupdate! This story is the most gripping lord of the flies story I've read, Jack and Ralph are so perfectly in character! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^

Hey, I've read your profile at fanfiction.net, and you know, I think very much like you about Jack and Ralph. When I finished reading Lord of the Flies, I just had to imagine how would it be for this two, living now in civilization. I think they are difrent from each other in some things, but are also very much alike, and I believe they could build an interesting relationship together. Actually, I fully believe they would certainly be together, though it wouldn't be easy!
And I have to say I love your fiction. Don't stop it! I had an idea myself, of a big sequel for lord of the flies, and began to write it, but didn't go on... But you, don't stop it, it's an interesting story you've created, and it's so good to know what others think about this wonderfoul book (and perfect couple!)

I love this fic, I can't wait for it to be updated.

This story is great. I love it! Please update.