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by lexyhamilton

person SightSoBlind
schedule July 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Spacing makes it very difficult to read could not keep track from one line to the next where I was corrected formating may make it more readable. Can't review on quality since I couldn't retain any thing due to the difficut task of attempting to read it.
person Bambu
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You have an elegant turn of phrase, and an almost hypnotic tenor to this piece ... one cannot help but be pulled into Wendy's reminiscences, hoping for better, but finding the reality so much worse. It's dark and rather horrifying, but beautifully written.
person Tyrisha
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooooo. now that was bitter and harsh. still liked it though
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