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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I'm back.
Sorry I haven't reviewed for the past three chapters but I've had the flu.
What wonderful chapters you have written.
I love the characters and I love the way you write.
This journey you are taking us on is quite thrilling.
I am looking forward to meeting the Prince.....
Sorry I haven't reviewed for the past three chapters but I've had the flu.
What wonderful chapters you have written.
I love the characters and I love the way you write.
This journey you are taking us on is quite thrilling.
I am looking forward to meeting the Prince.....
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I didn't realize anyone had started to do any fanfics of the Carpathian books. More please! Is there anyway I can receive notices as to when you update?
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Debby
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Debby
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love your writing.i sometimes have to pinch myself to realize i am not reading feehan.keep up the good work!!
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved your story.we need more of this type of writing
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.
This story is absolutely great! There are so few Christine Feehan fans out there, and even fewer good fan fictions based on her books. Thanks so much for writing it, I have been looking for carpathian series fan fiction for some time now. Great story, keep up the good work!
This story is absolutely great! There are so few Christine Feehan fans out there, and even fewer good fan fictions based on her books. Thanks so much for writing it, I have been looking for carpathian series fan fiction for some time now. Great story, keep up the good work!
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story alot.
It is well written and flows along nicely.
Jane and Dominic seem to have fallen for each other very quickly,
I know that they are "lifemates" but in reality they know nothing about each other.
Will this cause problems in the future??
It is well written and flows along nicely.
Jane and Dominic seem to have fallen for each other very quickly,
I know that they are "lifemates" but in reality they know nothing about each other.
Will this cause problems in the future??
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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was brill!!! Cant wait 4 the next chapter!!!
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August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT...so far, I'm looking forward to reading more. We need more Carpathian fanfictions, there are just too many males without their lifemates out there.lol. Anyway, yes love the story, love the writing you are very talented. But I didn't really like the use of present tence, I don't know I guess I'm just picky. I only use present tence when I write in first person. But I can easily get over that to read more.....UPDATE SOON
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was brilliant!! Can't wait for chapter 2!!!
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am love your story. There are not enough Dark Series fans out. Fabulous just fabulous writing. Can't wait for the next chapter