rate_review Reviews

I liked this. People in character, excellent writing, a realistic sort of scenario. Nice work.

Mhmm, thats a different story. Curious to see a 2nd chapter,maybe with M/M?

I've read most of your works and I love them soooooo much :) YOu are a talented writer with your words and phrasing, you make the reader feel as if they are in the room with the characters watching them and you keep them in Character! Something I enjoy especially with Raistlin.

I would love to see the conversation that took place after that. And, I'd like to know how long did Caramon know about it. For English not being your first language, you're extremely good. You write better than some who've known English all of their lives.

Now I'm going to wonder if Caramon always knew or not. Once again, a lovely one-shot.

o shitz. o holy fucking SHIT! this was amazing. this was it, the real truth about it. it was dirty it was shaming. that is what carnal lust is about, this is what people. its not sweet love making its ugly and dirty and its good and you hate yourself afterwards. especially if you are sophisticated raistlin majere.

you really had me going "O FUCK!" at the end of the story. damnit. i want to know what happened next, but i also dread it.
it was very realistic, i must say. very, to the brinck that i almost have to think you can look into peoples minds...or my own mind, for that matter.
"get on with the real stuff" yeah, that's what you think during that. wow. it blew me away.

i would be delighted to read more of your stories. you certainly have a great style, i like that. its not over descriptive in the sense of over-detailing unimportant things. it's, in fact, very perfect. and i love how they are both so in character. while i read it, i thought "yes, this is raistlin. that's how he feels, that's how lives and breathes and that's how and why he will leave his foolish brother one day, too."

just... wow.

I sure love Raistlin when he's "in character". Good story, if a bit depressing, but then that's what we love about Raistlin, isn't it? I hope you will write again, your english is fine.

Haha, of course you may befriend me on Livejournal. I think I saw your profile there too. ^_^ I don't go on livejournal much nowadays, me been straying. Though I should come back~ XD

Yeah! More Majere twincest must spread through the net! I think the Raistlin/Dalamar pairing has been too much. XD Doesn't have the same chemistry as the brothers. ^_^ Can't wait to see more of your stories, and I shall write too~! XD Apologies for the second review, but I was in a rare blabbing mood. XD

Oh! :D It really touches me that my story could inspire someone~ ^^ I feel special~ And your story I believe is just written so very wonderfully! This is something that I believe could happen. =P With Raistlin not matching the healthy physique of his twin, lovemaking would just make him pass out. XD This would be the way that he could get pleasure if by just the passionate nights of Caramon. But I really loved how your writing is. It was certainly beautiful, and English not your first langauge? *envies* o.o This was such an enjoyable read~

Oh yep, I took the implied incest of course~ XD And you certainly know how to leave it at a cliffhanger! Must have more please~ @@ Eee, hope to see it continued soon~ But me not rushing you. *whistles innocently* I really hope to see more of your work. It already started so wonderfully. Great and splendid job!

(Apologies that I am hyper, I can't help it~~ ^_^)