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beautiful. simply amazing. love the writing style.

Wow. That was hot.

this is great

Another great story, keep it up =) I love Aviendhea, definately my favorite female character. I also think that there is a fairbit of bisexuality in the sisterwife relationship.

Heh, I'm aware that they're more open than they'd likely be if Robert Jordan wrote it. However, this scene was just too hot in my mind to pass up. I tried to stay close to their characterization in the books, extrapolating on their personalities to see what they might be like in the bedroom; and, truth be told, I think that Aiel sister-wives might indeed have a portion of bisexuality for the women in it, which is why I had Aviendha initiate the lesbian activity. Min seems to me like the type that's open to trying most anything, once she gets past the culture's inhibitions about sex and really lets loose; Elayne is the only one that, to me, seemed like she might never be comfortable with it. So, I admit, I tweaked her a bit. It was in the name of artistic (erotic) license, though =).

Thank you for explanation. I certainly agree that the situation was too hot to go for Jordanesque-rated scene. And I think you're right on mark concerning aiel women and personalities of A/E/M. I hope you will write more about these four characters - perhaps some sort of series?

Excellent! I have been waiting for exactly this kind of stories and here you come to save the day. I really hope you will continue to write more stories.

Just some "cautionary" words: the girls on your story are quite a bit more... liberal than in original WoT. I certainly understand the reason for it but I think you could also write a little bit closer to canon and still do great story.

You did a excellent work. Are you working a new story right now? If so, please update soon.

Hell, why aren't there more of these types of fics? You would think there would be more than one R/A/E/M fic here.