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Chapter 13. Make a request? Wow (grin). I would . . but I can't think of anything really. The story's flowing along so great now. I really liked this chapter, the first part got me kinda choked up over poor Jason and Caleb I really hope things work out between them.( I love stories and Authors that have that kind of talent to reach in and touch you) and I had to chuckle at the end with Richard, his Lupa and Elias. Really good work there. Oh, sorry, back to the first part of this chapter, I really half expected Anita to make a showing there with Micah, I'm kinda glad she didn't.
Anyways, as long as you folks keep putting out fantastic chapters like the first 13, I'll be here waiting for them.

Chapter 12. (Blush, thanks for the chapter)Wow, that was the most powerful one yet. That had me bouncing between anger at Jason and that nasty wolf Shayne and choking up over poor Caleb. I only hope that Jason hasn't screwed up the relationship between them. Will Caleb forgive him?? (It's getting so's I check this site about every day looking for updates to the fantastic story) I know this probly sounds old now, but, please keep up the great work.

Chapter 11. Hey, thank you for your replys. As for this chapter, what can be said?? Again, I loved it, but Jason and Caleb breaking up? I hope not. And the cliff hanger ending, damn. So, where's ch 12?? come'on, I can't wait! LOL. Now, a little side note. I'm very disoppointed by the lack of replys from others, I mean, this series is getting plenty of hits, yet nobody has anything to say? (Shrug) Anyways, please keep up the great work.

Ch.9/ 10. I really enjoyed chapter 9 another well done chapter. Now, chapter 10. That one really choked me up about Jase loosing her and Nate's baby, but still another outstanding chapter.

Oh, wow, I loooooved chapter 7 & 8. Once again, keep up the grrreat work.

Chapter 5. Sorry for the late reply, works been keeping me busy.Hmmm, so, Richard found his "true" lupa. This should be interesting, wunder how Anita's gonna take it since everyone seems to be getting tired of her temper tantrums. And it's gonna be a real kick to see how the boy reacts to Richard being around more. Another good chapter.

Chapter 4. That was good, real good. Personally, I like Nathaniel this way, not nearly as submissive as he was it seems more like he's getting the life he should've had. As far as Jason (cuffing him up side the head)grin) you got the brother/sister routine down perfect LOL. As for Jason and Caleb? At first I wasn't so sure about them getting together, now, I like it. Again, keep up the great work.

Oh, wow. I loooved this chapter. Please hurry with the next chapter, I just got to see how this turns out.

Chapter 2, Very good, I can't wait for chapter three.

OK....can't say I am a Caleb fan...but I am curious.