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October 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Argh! No can't stop now! Please update and I promise I'll review. Kindest Regards ER
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story and I would be lying if I said I am not disappointed to see this story go unfinished. Since it has been over a year since your last update I can only guess this much. You capture Erik's attitude and character just wonderfully. I only hope that some day you will come back and finish it.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
what happened to escape?!!! oh no!!!!! that was really good, and that was a very well written lemon btw. update soon!!!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And you stop there? And you DARE stop there? do you have any idea how absolutely insensitive that is to your readers! I am downright offended!! That is just, absolutely...hmph! if you update soon you'll be forgiven! (just in case you can't tell I LOVED IT!)
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September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw, such a cute story. I like how Erik seduces Phillipe and Christine right underneath Raoul's nose, and how the music creates a world around them Raoul has no access to. I always thought Raoul wasn't the right partner for Christine. He can't understand what music does to people. Well, I can't understand either, since I'm as musical as a dead duck, but I know what writing can do to me, and I suppose it's the same. Raoul simply has no right to Christine or Phillipe. Go, shoo! And enter Erik. I'm curious what his plan will be like and what he will do next. I'm eagerly - but patiently - waiting for more.
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September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greetings Mrs. Smeagol:
I enjoyed the start of your story. The child was so adoreable. There were a few grammatical errors. Ex~ "That child that..."
Please fix them when you can. Also, please continue with this great tale.
I enjoyed the start of your story. The child was so adoreable. There were a few grammatical errors. Ex~ "That child that..."
Please fix them when you can. Also, please continue with this great tale.
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it...a real pice of work.