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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupddddddddddddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee pppppppppppppppppllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its good as usual, keep it up..ooh can i play with erik too?
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
uh oh...i like how you portray christine as a selfish spoiled brat/Bit*h i was so mad at her in the movie....anyway good chapter, keep it up...
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May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it,love it, love it....keep it up
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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated..i knew they would make up..keep it up please
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww poor thing, i hope eric reascues her soon
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story is alittle confusing and hard to follow...but i keep reading it...the only thing is you need to stop using the line "to sate your needs" i stopped counting after you used it five times in ch. 13 alone.
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
RAPE??? Do you really think I am able to rape a woman? Do you think I am really mad? Or that I have no feelings at all? Are you reducing me to a rapist?
No need to say I am very disappointed.
O.G.
No need to say I am very disappointed.
O.G.
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How many times the Phanton is going to threaten this Zuri until he really do whatever he wants to do? The story is beautiful but this part is taking too long. The story, that started beautiful and interesting, is getting a little boring...
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
sorry... he "does"...