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person Confuzzled-Neko
schedule May 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and burning. Loved the possessiveness of them
person Lyz
schedule March 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow. you are amazing. Loved this so much!
person Rousy_P
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Incredible, amazing, and all those adjectives that mean I enjoyed this story like crazy. I can actually *believe* this happening! Raistlin and Caramon's relationship is really complicated, and you portrayed them just as they are. Thanks for sharing!
person Rousy_P
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Oops* Sorry, I forgot about this.

"and right after that pleasantly suprised..." --> "and right after that pleasantly suRprised"
"Caramon groans in suprise as..." --> "Caramon groans in suRprise as..."
"Caramon blushes again and wringes his hands..." --> "Caramon blushes again and wriNGS his hands"

I'm terribly sorry for my being so picky, but when I'm reading an incredibly good story, I like it to be as perfect as possible. And your story is EXTRA good!
person oztan
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should keep going with this I like to see what happens next.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this pairing :) great fic~
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. I like the way you've written this fic and made the characters stay in character. Finally, a writer who does not portray Raistlin as a total blushing uke!

*hands out mage cookies*
person Circe
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Three words, sweet, sexy and poignant. What about Raistlin's pov, hey? ;-)
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That actually makes sense, it also shows one way to explain Caramon's affection. Hope for more from you!

P.s Thanks for the review.
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You wrote this and English isn't even your first language?!? Please write more as your story was so lovely and descriptive. I love how you wrote the twins, it just fit. I love those two and you wrote such an in-deep yaoi story of them. This kitty waits hopefully for your next yaoi story.
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