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for Holmes' Mistake

by pandapony

person liederlady221b
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A lovely ending...and beginning. I love that you had Holmes crawl into Watson's bed to be close to him...subtly showing his vulnerablity. Kudos for a fantastic story. Hated to see it end. *claps for encore*
person liederlady221b
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Spectacular chapter! Smut is wonderful, but nothing screams love and commitment louder than Holmes & Watson squaring off because each is fearful for the other's safety. Absolutely beautiful characterization and dialogue...yes, even though Watson couldn't speak for much of the chapter. But when he finds his voice, it's to protect Holmes. Wonderful storytelling. *wipes up fangirl gush drool* Can't help it. Thank you for sharing.
person Tiffany F
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
person Sophia
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A marvelous chapter. I like the way Watson regained his voice and I like how Holmes was so concerned for Watson's safety. Keep up the magnificent work!!
person Sophia
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another magnificent chapter. I really like how Watson encouraged Holmes to continue his ministrations; I loved the emotion conveyed between the two of them. I hope Watson regains his voice soon (if he does at all). Keep up the grand work!!
person liederlady221b
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I suddenly noticed the review link after I rated your chapter. Duh.
Finally! I was growing quite concerned that Watson's appendage was undergoing serious damage with all the unfulfilled groping, er, washing. Seriously, this is an exquisite story. Watson's frustration is palpable...even before the passion. And Holmes's reactions are tender and ardent at once; wonderfully in character. I, too, miss Watson's voice, but their love scene was all the more satisfying for the silence. These two have never needed words. Beautifully done. Thanks! Looking forward to much more.
DD
person Chat
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good gravy, pandypony!!!!

I'm going to send you my medical bills over this! Sweet christmas, damhot! Please give a care for those of us with weak hearts easily set a'flutter! ;) *takes a cold shower* Honestly, beyond the HOTNESS, your prose is very judicious. You don't roll into purple crackers or stereotypical humping. This is well-crafted character-driven work. Thank you so much for continuing to create complex, interesting stories. I tell you what-- I'd read your work be it slash, het, beastiality, defying gravity, physically impossible, involving Hobbits, WHATEVER. Your style is so very readable and engaging.

Oh dear Pony, please please please continue to update! I mean, today was a good day, but an update from zee Pony is like Good Day x 10000000000000.

Thanks so much for updating so regularly. It's so much fun to find a new chappie every few days. No pressure but... it would be super cool to have another update as soon as zee Muse strikes.

Huzzah!
person Mauz
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God Bless us but this is HOT!
person Sophia
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another superb chapter!! I like that they are back to communicating or, rather, communicating as best they can with Watson's lack of voice.
person Tiffany F
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow
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