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for With This Pen

by Spike119

schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I feel that the foursome was uncalled for and unnecessary. The time line was confusing however other than that it was an enjoyable story. I particularity liked Holmes punishment for his rapists, very smart.
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can see a staggering number of hits on this story, as well as others of yours, and it seemed criminal that you only had a handful of reviews. I'm sure that the reason is that in order to review you have to register first. I was reluctant to do that, and I've been lurking and reading until I got to the end of this story and then I thought, 'Nope, I HAVE to review!'. So now I'm a member of this fanfic site and I get to squee of this brilliant story all I like. :)

I Lovedloveloved it. I'm writing multi-chapter myself and I know how much effort went into this beautiful story; the character observation, the slow evolution of love, the switching time sense (omg!), and, the actual inclusion of a wedding ceremony. I've never seen it done in this era fanfic, and to do it so convincingly -- my hat is very much off to you!

Squee!

undun
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was going to read to the end before I reviewed, but this chapter was so incredible I had to pitch in early. You make exposition enthralling, and the characters are captured wonderfully. Thank you for this!
schedule November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Utterly gorgeous.
person lucifer
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my god this was amazing. truly enjoyed reading this masterpiece. i'm not even sure how to salute your genius properly or where to start telling you how much i enjoyed this. i am not one to normally review works i have read for i feel all i can say has been said before. but truly this is a magnificent story, romance and ofcourse all the lovely S/W lovin you could want. beautiful!!

~Freak on a Leash
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is beautiful. I love you Holmes/Watson fiction and I think this one is the best.
person Angela
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, it´s very well written....I guess I have to read it a second time!:)
person pdx_pwm
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished rereading this story from the beginning. It's just as intense and sexy the second time. I can empathize with Watson when he *finally* figures out that he's getting married. I'm slow off the starting blocks too. Thanks for a wonderful evening.
person Anon
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice series, though the last chapter was a bit of a stretch for me. The sudden intimacy between Holmes and Lestrade came out of nowhere, and made me think I'd missed a chapter.
I do love your writing style, and hope to read more good things from you.

Overall, I'd give the series a hearty A-
person Christina
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story, but why is chapter 6 identical to chapter 5?
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