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schedule June 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is sweet and naughty in the same time and this is hard to achieve. Why, why, WHY did you stop?!
person MASigma
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Amxing work there, lol. Hope to see more, perhaps a run in with Tweedle Dee and Dum for double the fun, lol
person bitemebeezlebub
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I particularly liked this story's references to tea, it was cute and naughty at the same time *smile
person bob
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really fucking good, write another chapter!
person Ophelia
schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I never thought of Alice that way before but that was just...wow. Great job! Can't wait to read more.
person AJAngelique
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
c1 & 2

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! SHE'S BACK! *squeals*
omg wow, amazing scene with the hatter
I wnoder what's going to happen next!
person Neal
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very excellent transition for an older Alice. The coming of age ceremony is an excellent fear for Alice who still wishes to keep with her childhood fantasies such as Wonderland. The masturbation scene tells us her body has out grown her mind which makes her a very interesting character on the whole. Write more, it'll be loved.
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