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by Stormborn Apostle

schedule June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok, I get the fact that you're pissed off at the nastiness in the world blah blah... I get that I do, but what you wrote IS sacrilegious mainly because you didn't deny the Aisha/Muhammad relationship! or adress the supposed paedophilia of the prophet of Islam... I personally cannot bring myself to read it, because its just seems that all you have is a slash fic supposedly depicting a character called jesus and another called Muhammad! a bit more background info about BOTH prophets and I think you could have something! your fic, your ideas sure but just not your exclusive characters...lol
person damius, manic and envy
schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
first off, when reading this at one in the morning we were laughing out loud. We do realise we've missed the whole point of this fic, but the 'holy erection' was just too funny. good work, two of us have to go to church after reading this, and we now piss ourselves laughing at the mere thought of it.
person Dillpickle
schedule June 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Greatness....
person surtur
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!

I love it
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
StarJedi555---I've meant to write a sequel, but never got around to it. Someday, though. I think the sequel would be slightly less plot, much more sexings. Besides, Jesus just seems like a bottom, ya know? Gotta get him meek and blessed and well-fucked. XD

Iota---Indeed.

Fate, Cerebrate of the Ragnarok Brood---A decent number of threats, lol. I could understand, perhaps, if this story was PWP, but since it's very romance-based and tolerance-based...well, only the prickiest pricks had a problem with it.

Mary---Glad that you liked it. :-D
person Mary
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing!
person Fate, Cerebrate of the Ragnarok Brood
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man, I bet you pissed some religious people off with this. Hoo boy, I'm glad that you are still alive after this.
person Iota
schedule June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"X-rated gay affairs between God and mortals, fanfiction has hit the Bible."

FUCKING LOL.
person Liz
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this *g*

I'm a slash writer myself but have never thought about writing slash on the Bible - I'm a practicing Catholic, I don't think I'd be able to go to Church without feelings slightly ashamed of myself. Meh, each to their own and hey, you changed it from a simple PWP to a story that actually carries a lesson, well done.

Also like your characterisation and agree that Jesus would be the 'bottom' - Mohammad was a warrior, Jesus a peacemaker, having them any other way wouldn't really work personality wise.

Oh, and to the person who mentioned Sodom and Gomorrah; the 'sin' of those people was never explicitly named in Genesis, other than the fact that "their sin is so flagrant" (Genesis 18: 20. NLT) ALSO, the rules about who can sleep with who and what is counted as a sin as a result were not writing until the time of Moses which was in LEVITICUS.

Liz
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
liz---I'm glad you liked it, and are open-minded enough to enjoy this piece.

When I started planning it, I intended it to be little more than a PWP, but somehow it evolved into a short morality story by the time I began to type. I'm glad it did, because it gave me a chance to show my opinion that the upper worlds, if real, would not be so primitive as to care about the trivialities of human morality.

Thanks for the review.
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