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for Peace on Earth

by Stormborn Apostle

person urmomlol
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is an excellent portrayal of jesus ;)
schedule August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Angel---My town is so horrible that I'm making a flash movie about it, lol.

Incidentally, if my parents read this story, they'd likely shit themselves and come after me with a butcher knife. :3

My kind-old-grandmother would probably order a hit on me, too. XD

Your long reviews are fine, don't worry. I appreciate all feedback, as long as it's intelligent, and yours is, heh.

urmomlol---Somehow, I just see Jesus as the 'bottom' in the relationship. It's not a sign of weakness, it's just a personality trait...he was a meek and humble individual, whereas Muhammad was more take-action, so...heh, this would be why I made it the first time Jesus is the pitcher. :-P
person a563
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wait with bated breath.
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've decided to call the sequel "The Second Coming" instead, HEH.

It shall indeed be swell.
person Angel
schedule August 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SpankMonkey1_69@hotmail.com

LOVE SHALL REIGN SUPREME!

Ahem...I got started looking through the other stories you had going on or had already begun (ashamed am I that I am barely doing so now..). This is definitely one tale that could (or at least should) get a person thinking. Learning to tolerate other people's beliefs, preferences, ideals is something that humanity in general really needs to work on. Though it shouldn't end there. Next should come acceptance. Learning to accept people for who they are and what their hopes and dreams are. FInally should come Love. To love people for their differences. I wonder if mankind will ever get it right.

Ver interesting way of pointing out, at least a portion, of the human race's faults. I really have to wonder what got you inspired (not to just write about this, but for the actual pairing). Either way, this was a very good (hopefully enlightening for some) read. Take care.
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I most certainly am! :-D
person a563
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Hope you are serious about the sequel!
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The sequel will be titled "Piece on Earth" and take place solely in a hotel room in the Bahamas. ;-)
person NO seriously.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck.
schedule August 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was also thinking of making a Fred Phelps/Jack Chick slashfic someday...where they both hate what they are, but can't stop loving each other. :-D

Just imagine it...Jack Chick lays Fred Phelps onto his bed.

"But...but...God hates fags," Jack whispers, uncertain and afraid.

Jack smiles at him. "Maybe so...but I love you."

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