rate_review Reviews

This is a great story!  I'd love a second Chapter!

Shit, this one-shot, sure was pretty intense and dark, wow! I liked it even though it contained N/C scenes and whatnot! The plot’s great and so was the character portrayal as well, as the character interaction and everything was well written! The “so called” rape/sex scene was also great, very nicely described even though it was indeed N/C, oh well!

A sequel would be nice sometime in the near future; “Don’t die Eragon . . . . After this war is over and which ever side has one, I’m returning, for you.” Quoting Murtagh, hehe! Ps. I spotted a typo; you simply misplaced a few letters and left some out! No worries, though!

... Am I really twisted if I think this should replace what actually happened? I would like to see Murtagh go through with his promise to come back for Eragon.

Intense! Really great story, you got the characters down pat, and you write with very nice imagery. Way to go!

Unfortunately I think the author has too long ago posted this and will never see this, my praise nor my request. what a GREAT story for a change where these 2 don't end up falling madly in love with each other, I am curious if the author or anyone else, would contact me about an alternate ending story about Sapheria and Eragon actually losing ultimately to Galbatorix, so Sapheria coudl actually be bread her true name discovered contact me at lordgriffin@earthlink.net

This made me do the Bill Clinton laugh. "Heh, heh, heh. (With a touch of "haw")."

That is a pretty good thing, btw.