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by hauntedangel3

person Brokenrose24
schedule January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is the best so far, everyone who writes a sexual peter pan romance story always writes him knowing how to perform sex. In this story, you have Wendy explaining which I find the most best way it would have happened. Bravo! I was also wondering if you were still going to finish this story, I hope so because I want to know what happens. I feel bad for Wendy but I really hope you do finish. I think both Wendy and Jane should just stay in neverland...I mean really...what do they need in London? Smoke? Bread and water?....Neverland is an island with fruit, nuts, waterfalls...XD so again I love this story and I hope you finish this!
schedule November 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story please write more.
Hope to see where this can go...
person Ruberta
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a well-written story. You depicted Peter's awkwardness and boyish innocence very well. I can't wait until you update so we can all see what is going to become of Peter and Wendy.
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please please continue! I've been waiting for a story like this for years!
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Loving this! Can't wait for more.
person LyeLye
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hes like a super hero "dust uhm!" Bwah i love that. And damn is he hot as a man.
person alice
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow this is amazing!!! probably one of the best fan fic's i have read so far! i cant wait to find out what happens next so get writing!!
cya
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic!!! Hope to see it continue!
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I like this story already! Do update again soon. It's great!
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