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Awesome start, I'm sad to see that there isn't anymore chapters, though?! Because this is really good, I'd love to read more! Anyway, the plot's rather interesting and the character portrayal and character interaction's great too, everything is also well written and well described!

I hope you'll write more someday, please do and if so update soon...

I dont got an AFF account, but Id like to beta. Just contact me VIA email if you want.
It looks pretty good so far, though a bit confusing. Just why isnt Roiben sleeping with her? Because he doesent want to? Or because courtly duties keep him from doing so? Hope you update soon!