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I have laughed, I've blushed, I've done so many things reading this and although I think I clicked on a random chapter to send you words of encouragement, just know I've sat here for nearly 4 hours reading from chapters 1 all the way up to 29. That's when you know you're doing something right if you have me sitting this long and reading something that's not in a hard copy form. Can't say I'm happy to learn that it's left on a cliffhanger, I just hope that you will find it possible to update. Thanks again for such a fun ride through all the ups and downs with this story. 

Hey, you probably don't check this account or your reviews anymore. Just wanted to let you know this has been a favorite story of mine for years. I actually just reread it last night. Idk what it says about me but I like Cass and Hook's complicated abusive relationship. I actually remember when you updated the last chapter! Anyway, I know time stretches on, we lose interest. For me once I finish planning a story I might never actually write it down because I know how it ends. I hope you didn't stop worrying because of a personal tragedy. This isn't a review to guilt you into giving me the ending lol though I'd like that. It's enough that I can come back to this fic and read it over again. Weird how that works. Years later I'm still rereading an unfinished fic, when you almost completely forget finished ones. Idk I think I meant for this to sound nicer. Actually, now that I'm older your a/n are really interesting. I sympathize a lot with i guess this character now. I'm sure you're at a completely different point in your life. Anyway, idk why, I just wanted to say I've enjoyed this bit of your writing for a long time and I keep coming back.

it the second time I read your story and I still find it amazing! please finish it!

Really enjoying the story- please keep going!!

MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! I chant in unison with the masses of others who have been fortunate enough to come across this tale!! I was up until 330 this morning reading it in it's entirety!!! I'm absolutely enchanted by the characters you've cultured!!! I can't wait to read more please please update again soon!! I love the premise and am still steamy from all the delicious lemonade you've given us (*wink*wink*)!!
I'm pleading with you! Please write more soon!!!

Cass aka LuciussMistress (my names Cassandra too! I couldn't believe it when I read your heroines name!!! *BIG cheesy grin*) :P

The odd repetition or dodgy phrase here and there, but overall a very well written story with an interesting plot. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

so im really hoping that you will update for this story soon cause it is really great. I want to know if peter crashes the wedding or not. so please post some more?

I'm reviewing as I go (up to chapter five and there's 29! Oh my!)but I had to say at the end of chapter four with the snoring bit... the last line had me laughing for quite a while. I know I shouldn't laugh when other people are distressed but I couldn't help it. Shame shame shame and the like but I think the story is going along well.

OK, I understand that for the sake of the story Cassie and Jason had to confront Hook, but in reality she should never have gotten out of the car! They would've been much safer there and could've driven away. And how did Hook know WHERE in time to come find her? He could've ended up in China or somewhere else far away.

Ack, you're killing me! She gets rescued yet again only to be recaptured by Hook! And where's Peter Pan? Isn't he supposed to kill Hook to free Cassie? So NOW what's going to happen?!