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August 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just finished Ch. 14 "The White Hats." Boy, this is REALLY getting good! I can't stop reading it! I'm fearful for her, for whether Hook will capture her again and punish her the same way the female slaves were, and I'm also wondering if Peter Pan is going to show up and be part of her rescue. And I can't wait to hear how they travel in-between worlds.
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August 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an intriguing story! Just finished the "Lemons" chapter.
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August 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!! I just got the joke. the guy who plays hook in the movie is named Jason Isaacs. That is so funny. It took me a while to remember why the name jason was so significant. anyways thats cool how you worked him in there. soo is her husband jason supposed to look like the real jason too? just thought i would ask. if you mentioned this in an author note....... i never read them. just so you know.
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August 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cute! a little short maybe but still cute. still loving this story.
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August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome story!!!!! I absolutely love it! I cant wait to read more im favoritng it on my computer so i can keep track. Please keep writing!
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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm addicted to this story!
I literally check back daily for a new chapter!
I wish there was more depth to "Jason", so I'd feel sorrier about his demise. But right now all I can think about is: WHAT IS HOOK GOING TO DO NEXT!?!
I really like the Cassie isn't the typical "Ooo, I just woke up in Neverland" MarySue. She's got depth and dimension.
Keep up the awesome work!
I literally check back daily for a new chapter!
I wish there was more depth to "Jason", so I'd feel sorrier about his demise. But right now all I can think about is: WHAT IS HOOK GOING TO DO NEXT!?!
I really like the Cassie isn't the typical "Ooo, I just woke up in Neverland" MarySue. She's got depth and dimension.
Keep up the awesome work!
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I've already reviewed but just to give you incentive, I LOVE THIS STORY! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! OH GOD update and finish it soon! With tasty Hook action, and don't let him get all softy now, and you better not kill off anyone, he's just too sexy so she can't resist him anymore lol!!!
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
As kinky and crazy as this sounds -- Hottest Chapter EVER!!! I mean, I wouldn't want to be in that situation, but damn... DAMN... lol!
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October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow incredible story! This is really twisted and HOT, haha! Ummm I think it should end with Hook hunting her down and.. eh... more rough non-con? Pllllleeeeaase? And if you don't want to post that up here, maybe you could write it just for me???
Lol Love the story, please update soon! :)
Lol Love the story, please update soon! :)
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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Fucking beautiful story! I ♥ it! Let me know when you add a new chapter up, will ya? My E-mail is kinoko_thelittlemushroom@yahoo.com
Can't wait to read more!
-Kinoko
Can't wait to read more!
-Kinoko