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Not totally unexpected- apart from the evisceration of Simon, which took me by surprise. Good chapter nevertheless, even if it makes me long for the chapter where Hook finds Cassandra again. And I'm evil and hopes he won't be too lenient of her! ;-)

Isn't it annoying how work cut into writing time?

Ahhh, poor Simon! I didn't see that coming! But it's so satisfying to see Cassandra get away, even if I also long to see her re-captured! >;) Excellent writing as always, and I also really liked the part with them looking at the stars. Please keep writing!!

I confess I have been a selfish reader of late. There have lately been a number of really good stories that I have yet to review and this is one of them. I have been wanting more plot development and I can see that's about to happnen. I look forward to your future chapters.

Very nice chapter. You make a very interesting character out of Hook. He seems perfectly aware of how Cassandra are affected, and sometimes even seems to care- but he still keep her captured and forced. Simon's explanation of Hook's character is very good. I really hope that this won't just end with Simon rescuing her, she gets away from Neverland, and that's it. I can't really see her staying with Hook either, but I'd like a more satisfying resolution than just the easy one out. I have high hopes on you! Happy writing!

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter. Please don't hold us in suspense much longer!

Blimey, very dark but very well written. I like that we are getting to see the darker side of Hook and neverland, it makes the characters seem more rounded. Keep going its great, looking forward to the next update :)

This story kicks ass...keep writing please! I am greatly looking forward to the next chapter!

>Shiver< That's horrible! Great installment as always...As much as I want Cassandra to get away, now I *really* want Hook to re-capture her...(Sorry, Cassandra!)

I really like you story especially your wicked Hook!!! Keep on wrting and update soon ... P-L-E-A-S-E!!!!!

I must confess that I wasn't that impressed when I started reading. "OC meets Hook, Hook falls in love, Hook mends his ways, happily ever after." I'm sorry, but most stories with an OC, or a Wendy for that matter, have been that way. This story, however, is nothing like it. It's actually getting better by the chapter, instead of weaker- something multi-chapters too often become. Cassandra is an interesting character, and Hook IS a pirate. He is selfish and cruel- but he has nicer sides too. Just as he is in both movie and book. I'm enjoying this fic greatly, and I look forward to read more! I appreciated that you don't shy away for the nastier aspects.

As for reviews, well, you may get more if you posted it in the book section. Even if the fic is based on the movie, most people still look for PP-fics in the book-sections. Do you have a LiveJournal? There are at least two communities there where this fic could be posted. You can also answer feedback there, which I find very nice. Another way to get attention is to review other fics- it usually makes people check you out. But make sure you are logged in if they do, so your name gets linked.Some people are put off reviewing when the writer asks for them. Don't know why, but there it is. Another way to get attention is to review other fics- it usually makes people check you out. But make sure you are logged in if they do, so your name gets linked.

Happy writing!